33.Don�t need reason

33.Don�t need reason

A Poem by pal
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Asked my friend; Who this john was!; �I don�t know�, he said; What! You spoke that long!!; Felt like; What�s wrong!; Need a reason!!; Talking to another.

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Don’t need reason

 

Just another day

An evening out

Walking with friend

Unwinding minds

 

Our usual path

Walking, cross at times

Through the basements

Up above bridges

 

Friend said, wait!

Some one over there

Heyy… john.. heyyy..

John stopped..looked back

 

My friend was excited

Hello john! How have you been!!

Oh! So long we never met

How is your family!

 

Nice to see friends

Exchanging n laughing

About small things

Happened way long ago

 

Over 10 minutes

John n my friend

Were talking over

Didn’t like disturb

 

He was all smiles

I was curious to know

Who is this john!

N all that exchanged

 

Asked my friend

Who this john was!

“I don’t know”, he said

What! You spoke that long!!

 

Felt like

What’s wrong!

Need a reason!!

Talking to another

 

Down to essence

All are sound n light

Vibrations n energy

Links in Cosmic plan

 

Very first sights

Some, feel attractive

While some repelling

Match or mismatch

 

People as vibrations

Each relate with other

12, results excellent

12, takes time, slow

 

12, indifferent

N 12 destroy roots

How you vibrate!!

Check your birth moment

 

Pal

Poem n Video by Pal

74.You don't need a reason

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7qqgt3PGG4A

 

© 2008 pal


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wow, i really enjoyed the concept behind this work of insight pal, balancing the vibration,
"don't need reason" showing how destiny has power of all, this awsome poem definitely draws
the reader to ponder, the form and colors worked very well, as well, speaks poetry in the moment, mike

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece I read twice. Everybody will read this somewhat different, which is no big deal. To me, it's about connecting to other humans and the walls that stop us. When I read it like that, I feel it. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well I'll check my birth moment! I realise this is a serious piece and your meaning was not lost on me. People walk past each other in the street, heads bowed...don't talk to me, I might have to answer God forbid...
One question; how did he know the guy's name was John? Just a good guess...I guess?
Cheers,
Helen.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so interesting...we do all react to different people in different ways. We are multi faceted human beings. "How you vibrate" that is a great line! I enjoyed this poem. Lydia

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 10, 2008
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