World's Greatest Decisions

heart door open 

mine

molting, cracking weary crusts

shedding no’s

nights of obscurity

insecurity

your words chisel 

world’s greatest decisions

with each breath

knock the dominoes

down the line 

in their wake

beauty rises

breathing in life anew 

with the reverberations 

of yes

beautiful scars

let me know 

to love you

knowing the pains

that etched them

better than most

shutting them out

with ink

knowing the scars

wanting to remove them

release you

give you

peaceful vision

absolution

knowing i can’t

instead

let you breathe

in your space

your time

your way 

only you

can make you

who you 

really are

all I know 

is this

your beauty astounds

and

when i think of my future

you’re it

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you express desire and emotion. The statement allow the reader to think and ponder each line. So many statement stood out in this poem. Hard to pick the best.
"only you
can make you
who you
really are"
Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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if thats not a love poem I dont know what is..that was so stunningly emotive..beautiful and the ending was so touching..even though its full of pain it carries a hope loved it

[E.H. Monroe]

a lucky person indeed. Just having some who wants to take away scars, emotional or physical is a helluva promise to make. But even in the end the realization that you have to let that person do things on their own is hugely important. You have a lot of love here that I'm sure is returned. You keep pushing that beautiful vision and the dumbs that you wrote this for will get it eventually. If not, give him a quick swat in the chops...that should do it