I FEAR………

It is just an expression of my fears

I tried a lot to make you mine,

I tried a lot to tell you I'm dying,

I tried a lot to see you MY LOVE,

I tried I tried and I tried…..

 

But now I think I m wrong,

The path I chose was not along,

The way I loved was beyond,

So now I think I m wrong…….

 

I loved you not because I wanted to,

I loved you not because the love was so true,

But I loved you...because you wanted me too..

 

Thats why I fear every bit of it,

Fear of loving you,

Fear of losing you,

Fear of not loving madly,

Fear of not getting it madly,

Fear of your MOVING ON,

Fear of my going on,

Fear, Fear and Fears………

Now I Fear of that when you will GO...

Where I will Go………???????????

Author's Note

I wrote it a long time before.
I have not checked it because i don't want to remember those days again in my life...
May be someday in future when i will be out of those pasts I will work on it again...
Thank you!!!

Reviews

[Candylove.]

So pure, untouched, raw emotion. This is outstanding.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a poem that breaths alive with emotion and questioning~ well done!~

[lost.in.hell]

I can say dat u hav impressive talent but more than dat u hav a beautiful heart dat is untouched .............
seriously u hav loved some1 truely he was really lucky to hav u but people sometime dig their own grave...........

[Ashley]

this was really good, your tallent shows even thought you wroting it a while ago. i like the repetition of 'fear' at the end, even though it doesnt flow, it make the emotion really clear.

[x]

The fear..great detailing here of how it grips.
Love how doubt seems to drive the fear here but doubt being something that hasn't happened yet...The question is, is the fear real?

Most enjoyed the form....Also, the write covers the subject in a manner that has a great feel to it.
Thanks for sharing..

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we have great concern for things we need not to have. Fear make us crazy and sometime make the person we need ant to escape. Better to swim in the great pleasure and happiness and hope for a good ending. I like this poem. Very strong and to the point.A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[ShaneBerry]

you have alot of great talent in this area of writing! great job!

[TAO]

Well, passionate, to say the least... You seem to have gone wild with this one. Trust me, I get it. Perhaps your prior critics were right... Perhaps you are in love with being in love...? Maybe, maybe not, but I definitely see where you're coming from... Good read, Lavina K.