Angel's view

Angel's view

A Chapter by Robin
"

short and to the point

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human mind seeks
patterns of desire and form
missing the magic

 

 



© 2011 Robin


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Robin
what do you see ?

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We seek conformity in our worlds and walk so easily past what we're really meant to see -- the beauty and the magic of the world. We miss the way flowers grow from between concrete slabs, or the way that the rails of a house rust down the brick and vines cover the deteroriation.

Well said! Seek the magic.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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we search for happiness without realizing it is there sitting within us. we strive to gain this and that...while to be content all we need to do is look around at the earth...find the arms of people we love...by seeking- we make it harder for ourselves to find sometimes-

Posted 12 Years Ago


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a mirror? Is that wrong? I believe patterns of desire and magic are all inside of us. But then I'm weird like that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ah , that is the worst~ i hate when that happens

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A cosmic want ad, straight & to the point.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brings to mind a favorite quote
"It's not what you like that makes you fat, it's what you get."

I see white rabbits and top hats everywhere....

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I see a subtle manipulation of the form?? one less syllable in first line to mirror the idea of us seeking patterns and "form" but missing the magic of the words? do I win? haha!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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do i have to see something? :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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the imagination is lost to the "normality" of the surrounding world. We get up, we go to work, we come home, we sleep, and the cycle continues, leaving little room for magic. Maybe we can create more, after reading poems such as yours.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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"and in between the moon and you, angels get a better view of the crumbling difference between wrong and right." -counting crows.

good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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what do I see .. a mind missing a certain kind of stimulation, a spirit needing more ..

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