my luv 4 justin

my luv 4 justin

A Poem by graynuss

my luv fore justin
by:mackeznie
my luv 4 justin ,
i luv him !!
its so much ,
that wen im in Skl n the Teacher is tlkin ,
i dnt here her ,
jst think of him drawin <3's on my notes !!
id b a gud wife 4 him ,
evry tym i was dustin ,
my house for justin,
i wud be bustin,
a rhyme at the same tym ,
of my luv 4 him !!
MY justin !!

© 2012 graynuss


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graynuss
this is my songg i want 2 sing it for justin bieber sumtimes i sing it in the shower let me no wat u think (: plz review nicely im new to this (:

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hey mackenzie :) i'm 15 in 9 days! yay! so were kinda the same age :) anyway, it's a cute poem and i used to love justin bieber too i must admit! his song Boyfriend, i couldn't help falling in love with! haha. anyway, i love that you're expressing your love of Justin and everything but it would be better if you typed it properly. i had to read it over and over to understand it! There's nothing wrong with text speak or spelling errors but when you write a whole poem like that i find it a bit strange. maybe it's just me though! i mean i type like that on facebook and stuff but i think on writerscafe maybe you should stick to proper typing :) don't take that as bad though i loved the poem! xx

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 28, 2012
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Tags: justin, bieber, love, heart, poem

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hello im mackenzie im 15 years yung, i go 2 church evry sunday & sumtimes other day's with my mom, i like poems & sunsets too, and myy fave music, 2 listn 2, is justin bieber im a beliber, luv it o.. more..

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