Forgive me ...

calling out to she who's my life

Forgive me
for your hate isn't something I can take
My feelings for you were never fake.

Forgive me
for I pine for you
Without you my beats will be painful, whatsoever few.

Forgive me
for I long to be fed by your tender hands
The nimble fingers that weave magic akin to a wand.

Forgive me
for without you I am all alone
Herein lies a void, only if it could be shown.

Forgive me
for 'I love you' ain't just a line
It’s a compendium of my emotions, left unbound by time.

Forgive me
for without you my nights are blue
Staring at the crescent moon, all i can ever think of is you.

Forgive me
for redemption is all i seek
I will henceforth be cautious, even turn meek.

Forgive me
for I want to hold you once again
Just to reinstate the belief that I am still sane.

   Forgive me
for I want to see the sweet smile on your face

The gleam that drives away melancholy without a trace.

Forgive me
for all my dreams are cast around you
Once shattered, they won't be build anew.

Forgive me
for I have lost possession of my heart
It's yours now, even death won't do it part.

Forgive me
for i crave to wipe away your tears
Transcend with you to a utopian world where there ain't no fear.

Forgive me
for at times i went overboard
And behaved as a lout belonging to the horde.

Forgive me
for "You know me inside out" is all i can say
To regain your trust my lady, any price i am ready to pay.

Forgive me
for with you inside, i was never alone
I brazenly faced the world to which i now fall prone.

Forgive me
for my soul is already taken
Watching you walk away, my inner core is shaken.

Forgive me
for nyctalgia is slowly beginning to grow
Rendering me weak at the knees, forcing me to kowtow.

Forgive me
for its hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere i go
I can no longer put on a show.

Forgive me
for all i beg for is one last try
The last chance before you turn away and say goodbye.

Forgive me
for however naive this may sound
You are the only ethereal beauty this mortal has ever found.

Forgive me

for till my last breath i'll keep praying to the Heavens above

awaiting to hear from my angel , the three magical words of Love.

Forgive me
for i can't stop loving you
It's something that i will always do.

Forgive me...

Author's Note

honest reviews are most welcome .. i have poured my heart out to shell out these words ..

Reviews

[Liza]

the literal wording flowed smoothly
the emotions felt like they were genuinely expressed
sometimes i wondered if you were asking forgiveness from a lover and other times i was wondering if the forgiveness you really seek is from self for giving so much to another that does not give back...
you inspired a lot of emotion and that in itself makes a great write.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

That was very poetic. The repetition in it, gave a very effortless flow to the piece.
Nicely done! :)

[Melinda Weber]

Oh, so beautiful. I am so glad I stumbled upon your work. The emotion and flow connect through each stanza, great write :)

[Arielle Ann]

oh wow!! you know the title drew me towards this write...this was so very endearing..you indeed poured out your heart here...what can I say about these lines...these are spoken from the heart, so there can't possibly be any errors :) these lines are here to be felt, and cherished...forgiveness is something we crave both from ourselves and at times from the second person and often they entwine...some things we do at the spur of the moment and regret is all we have left afterwards...again when I read these lines I had the feeling that why does it always have to be pain(mostly love) to bring the art out in a person...I may be wrong,but its just a perception...coming back to your write-its very touching, beautiful and genuine..loved this one !

[Me]

I really like this.

[Walk away slow poet]

Wow, so deeply profound and straight to the point. I love the depth of this write, Awesome writing!

[Enigma]

And does read like an outpour, encompassing the thought process of a forsaken lover in such beautiful words that one remains captivated till the end. I loved it thoroughly and its going straight into my favourites. Keep up the great work! :D

[moonbeam40]

LOVE IS THE MOST POWERFUL FORCE IN THE uNIVERSE , AND TIME IS A GREAT HEALER, YOUR POEM IS HEART RENDING, THERE HAS TO BE A MESSAGE IN YOUR POEM, FOR ALL PEOPLE WHO HAVE LOVE IN THEIR LIVES , TO PUT THAT LOVE FIRST ALWAYS ,THANKYOU FOR SHARING YOUR WORDS WITH US, A VERY GOOD READ mOONBEAM.

[lackluster]

i really enjoyed reading this.
there are so many stanzas,
and, while all connected,
certain ones can be categorized to different people.
I really like it!

[Que]

Beautifully written. I loved it, great job.
Cheers.

[Emily Rae]

well it sounds like you've learned your lesson and are perhaps worthy of being forgiven