One Heart Severed Another Is Broken

Collaboration between Deron Alexis and I

Deron

if a heart bares scars

Can it really belong

I belong to you

Oh…one who owns me

My heart sobs from when I cut it

Might it be safer with you?

Please take it somewhere nice

Hadeel

Oh… darling I wish I could

But I have to go …

You don't know how hard is it

but I got to  leave…

I'll take our sweet moments

and keep it between,

 dried petals of a red rose

You once gave it to me …

In a book of poems

 you wrote  it for me…

 

Deron

wrote it from my heart I did

and now to make you stay

my heart Itself I'll give

just put it next to yours

and all will be well

oh love of loves and grace of graces

let my heart see paradise "

 

Hadeel

Oh god … it hurts so bad

Its invading my body

like a poisoned sword

Its cutting my heart into small

Pieces of a broken memory

Lying on a wet floor of tears

 

Deron

then throw it away

let your departure leave

give me the sword

to cut my heart out

and you can heal

next to me dear beauty

next to my heart that longs to be

embraced by you once again"

 

Hadeel

Please my first and only love

Forgive me … I'll leave

With a broken heart …

 

Deron

A heart that I know

Would want what mine wants

For us to be one again

Is there anyone else?

Who like you,

Like your death dealing beauty

That can cut, scar and woo me at once?

Hurt and yet remedy?

Cure and so kill?

 

Hadeel

I hope… no.. no.. I believe

That someday soon

You will find a caring heart

Better than me …

And your new love will heal

Every wound I drew

On your precious heart

Please forgive me …

But I have to leave ….

Author's Note

This poem is inspired by amazing Deron , review please :)

Reviews

[Phillitup]

different but enjoyable and creative with a nice flow!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you for your opinion i appreciate it :)

[Phillitup]

:)

[scripted]

this was a different way of writing...i like the emotion you put into this, and enjoyed reading it... nice job on this piece!!! yours truely Danielle (scripted)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you so much I appreciate it ^__^

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

This is amazing! Your styles gel so well and it flows brilliantly. I love this poem, well done you two!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you for your review :)

[rnuff]

very nicely written and amazing!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

oh thank you ^_^

[Deron Alexis]

BOOMM and this ladies and gentlemen is what happens when a really talented poet teams up with me really I was just ranting the whole thing took shape after hadeel came in with the whole i'm leaving concept

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you Mr Deron for your sweet comment , but i think you are more talented than me this is why the whole poem took a beautiful sentimental shape when you mixed your words with mine :)