Someone Quoted As Saying...

Someone Quoted As Saying...

A Poem by Hamza

never ask, never presume, never anticipate ...
you are unique in yourself ...
every tear is just so priceless ...
lament little for even the slightest thing ..

because,
 
hopelessly, the hope is that ..
we have so much to feel good about ...

© 2012 Hamza


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I love the message in this piece, but the excessive use of periods makes me feel like something is really hesitant in this. Maybe there's more to it than we're seeing, maybe there's something in it only you know is there. I'm not sure. But I enjoyed this very much. It left much to be wondered, and it was beautiful and very simple. You didn't toss around words just to try and look deep. Your words spoke for themselves. Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


uplifting, very uplifting indeed. it really brightened my day.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hi Hamza a beautiful, uplifting piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


beautiful analogy in very few words, priceless.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your words are very true...Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Words to live by, especially at this time of year...well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Short, sweet... and to the point.... hope conquers all....

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Hamza
Hamza

Jammu, Jammu & kashmir, India



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