OBLIVION

OBLIVION 

No matter how much you try to make yourself believe that everything's alright... 

Many times you would still get reminded of the emptiness inside. 

You've been missing something. 

You wish to have it back. 

Absolute fact is there are things that you can have back. 

But there are things that are really gone. 

And all you could ever wait is for oblivion to come.

Reviews

[Owen Aldin]

I love the short snappy style. Its a lot of emotion packed into a short space. Not an easy skill but done brilliantly!

[terry smith]

from the deepest depths comes the pain you write of and if you are lucky you are waiting in limbo for the day you can pick yourself up and live again.

[hanir]

I agree...and to the deepest depths of the earth Ive been searching for that luck! Whew!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts! 😊
I appreciate it.

[terry smith]

You will search in vain...until you stop looking, then there it will be.

[hanir]

Yes..hopefully soon..

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yes, there are things we never get back, no matter how long we wait for them...love the image with the poem...

[hanir]

Yes..and it hurts like hell.
Thanks for reviewing. 😊

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it does..you are welcome :)

[binibiningmaya]

"...there are things that are really gone..."
Haaaaay. Hehe. -------- can't find the right word Ms. Hanir... I'm speechless..

Great poem as always :-)

[hanir]

Thanks! 😊

[binibiningmaya]

You're welcome Ms. Hanir :)

[JodieAnne]

I love this! read most of your poems and you're a great writer!

[hanir]

Oh so nice of you to read my posts. Thanks a lot! 😊

[Arjun Singh]

This actually portrayed the ultimate truth of each man
's life, nd dat made it a truly gripping read
Enjoyd it!! :)

[hanir]

Thanks for taking time to read. 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

The words are true in your poetry.
"You've been missing something.
You wish to have it back. "
All of us hold regret. Life is finding and losing. Hard to hard tight to things we need. Very good of words leading the reader to strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hanir]

Thank you for such a wonderful review! 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.

[JulianaSun]

Oblivion - as in the final breath, or the big sleep? We all stuggle with voids at some point in our lives, and we all lose things. Some forever. Others only temporarily.
There is much sadness in your words, and a deep sense of loss...
You write beautifully :)

[hanir]

Thanks! You are a creative writer too! Love reading your poems.