Scattered IntentA Poem by New Dawn
Words that refuse to stay upon the page.
They break rank and file to s l i p carelessly from line to line, and loiter furtively in the margins.
Assassins of poetry...
they obey no master, reluctant to convey any meaningful message. Yet I am aware, as I reshuffle phrase after agonising phrase, it's those words not written
the dramatic pauses.... the breaks
that tell the real tale. © 2013 New DawnReviews
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Added on February 1, 2013Last Updated on February 1, 2013 AuthorNew DawnUnited KingdomAboutI have always written to some extent. seem to be leaning toward poetry at moment. In my other existance I am a nurse , wife , mother of three. Just like to share and get back some constructive critici.. more..Writing
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