"I am Jack the ripper that haunt this street"

"I am Jack the ripper that haunt this street"

A Poem by dan nacario

I am Jack the ripper that haunt this street,
And wait behind the beauty of darkness,
For me to steal their precious little breath,
From the ill-fated life they do possess,
"From Hell" is where my cold soul come from,
Only to deliver their scream goodbye,
For I am their Death, that's what I've become,
One by one I watched them all fade to die,
I scratched out their hearts for it is no use,
And carved out their bones with my sweet cold knife,
For against insanity my mind lose,
When emptiness filled my darkened life,
     To your soul, a goodbye I shall tell o'er,
     In this line..." Yours truly, Jack the Ripper".

© 2011 dan nacario


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Oh this is written in such depth and darkness, such death and cold lines in this and it is excellent. I really like this a lot from beginning to end. Nice lines all through out, including these:
"And wait behind the beauty of darkness,"

"Only to deliver their scream goodbye,"

"I scratched out their hearts for it is no use,"

"When emptiness filled my darkened life,
To your soul, a goodbye I shall tell o'er,
In this line..." Yours truly, Jack the Ripper"."

Posted 9 Years Ago


very awesome

Posted 9 Years Ago


thanks
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Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked this. Can't wait to read more from you :3

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is amazing!!
I love it!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


it feels like a billion years since i read something like this. it certainly has bite to it and knows where to influence a reader along the way. it is well written to the max and worth honorable mention.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Welcome to the world of a man with a heart so cold and black.Dive into the realm of the most infamous serial killer of all "Jack the Ripper".

Posted 9 Years Ago



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dan nacario
dan nacario

iriga city, cam. sur, Philippines



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