Lost love

Even love changes

We are sitting so near
but feeling remote,
need of a cool breeze,
But air is hot,
desires are the same,
Same lovers, same is the spot,
but passion is lost,
one who was someone special
why is so normal now,
Lovers changed like season
Without saying a sigh
neither show a dot,
looking at each other
with eyes full of grief
no one is expressing love
no one is exposing heart
Not even in short.

Author's Note

I wrote this when I was 19 year

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

you have expressed the way two people can grow apart.. love does change... it takes that exposing and expressing to let it grow.. takes nurturing... takes work.... nice, short concise lines that flowed well and helps the reader to FEEL what you are feeling.. nice job!

[hardeep sabharwal]

thanks AprilRN

[R Smith]

good for a 19 year old, I too wrote at that age, quite a lot that I have updated many times, this is a lovely tale of passion gone cold but you express it so well and give it such strength, bravo!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much sir

[Prabha Salimath]

Love doesn't mean together forever. Sometimes situation becomes very hard that you have to abandon your beloved for their sake. Life left you no choice sometime.

One thing all I see in many couples at first everything is correct later they split their ways of seeing the life, it cracks the relation for sure. Nice one.

[hardeep sabharwal]

thanks prabha salimath :)

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[Avinash]

Despite the age when you wrote it has profound meaning. We need to grow in order to learn to appreciate and sustain love. Their value is often realized once they are long gone, hope not the lessons.

[hardeep sabharwal]

thanks my dear friend