White clouds

poem

At last I can see the translucent light

The only thing left from my dimished life

I walk with care on clouds of white

My life of lost hope

Full of the things that you deride

Will I now grow with celestial might?

Can I but dare to dream?

That on this fateful day

You will unwrap your arms

Embrace me, absolve me of my sins

For can this place really subsist

Where all pain no longer exists

Can I walk with head held high?

And be that person you want of me

Will I now grow?

To become an oasis with tranquil waters

With limbs to love

With a heart, your haven

Reviews

[Juliet]

"To become an oasis with tranquil waters"
Such a descriptive line. This is a nice write. It is full of emotion and the love is easily conveyed. I enjoyed reading this. :)

[TheCreativityItself]

This is such a loving poem, It is really good.