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respect women,never underestimate them.This is to all my sisters in this world.

                             Like trees blossom in the light.

                              Like moon flashes in the night.

                            Girls too need humanity to bright.

                          Like men can be the 'man of the house'.

                     Why women can't be better than her spouse?

              

                           When she goes to earn for his life.

                     Why she always has to bear abuse all day and night?

                    Why is she paying for a crime which others have done? 

    Why don't men understand that she is too someone's mother,daughter or a wife?

                      Why her justice has always  been denied?

                      Why her pain has been paid with a bribe?

           

                   Why the people don't feel the agony of the father? 

                         What he will tell to his ailing daughter?

                    Why world starts adjusting with this everyday? 

               When their daughter or sister can be the victim any day. 

                               

                

Reviews

[Zero_Edge88]

"Well now, champion of women, you speak of their hearts as they ring true to who they are - which is a human. To speak of their inequality is to speak they are wronged for that of it is true. To speak of their universal role is an act of knowing they are more than just a position but a gift in where we value their lives as we ought to value ours with dignity, humility and respect. For all these we must never lose sight as to who they are in our life. They are our star, our heart and our soul for even where we even look into their truest sense they are human. For they are our inspiration, muse and mother, daughter and lover as well. So let us bow our heads of respect, kiss their hands with dignity and pray that today a woman will know they are loved in every way we love our life -selflessly and sincerely."

[Harsh]

thank you Zero_Edge88 for reviewing it.......................

[ron]

Very true words. It is not fare how women are treated worse than men.

[dw817]

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I'm - not understanding Harsh. What crime or women paying for and what have the others done ?

[Harsh]

A woman faces so many abuses from some cruel people that it leads her to depression and their life gets spoilt ,so in this way the crime has been done by others but she pay for it.

[dw817]

... for being a woman ? No other crime ? Wouldn't that be considered discrimination ?

[Harsh]

being a woman is not a crime,i am telling that the people who spoils a woman's life gets free from the bar after certain period of time but the women suffers for her whole life so there must be some strict laws against the people who torture the women

[dw817]

Torture ? Isn't there police to prevent this sorta thing ?

[Harsh]

well, some countries are still fighting with such kinds of discrimination.But hoping that they will tackle it well soon.

[dw817]

Hmm ... I know we have problems here in the states. My Dad brought me up REALLY protected. Anytime something was out of place, like the Ku Klux Klan invading Octoberfest when I was 7-years old one time, he didn't stick around. He grabbed me and we ran out the entrance.

Well they weren't after us, but I understand now about being in the wrong place at the wrong time. At some point I was thinking of writing documentary about my life and entitle it something silly with a long title, "It's hard to get arrested outside if you're in your house at night."

Crazy I know but a lotta truth. How MANY law-abiding people get arrested if they are in their home, their front door locked, alone, 6-7pm at night ? I imagine not too many. The more you can pull away from 'dangerous corners' and keep your head on a swivel to see what's happening around you. The safer I think you will be.

[Harsh]

so girls aren't that safe in their hometown also in many countries. so to build a healthy and safe environment for girls we have to stick togather and fight discrimination.......
and yeah thanks for the review and be safe and happy..........

[dw817]

Be strong, and definitely DEFINITELY walk in strength. :7

[Rosaria_V]

Truly deep, and all such true words

[Harsh]

thanks Rosaria for reviewing it.............

[Jay]

Keep up good work baba.. Good luck for next one

[Harsh]

thank you jay bhai

[Great Aunt Astri]

Harsh, you speak for millions!
One way to combat inequality is to celebrate the difference. Different but equally valid. I like the repetition on the question 'why?' makes one sit up and listen! Good for you

[Harsh]

thank you Aunt Astri for reviewing it...........

[Douglas White]

This is definitely a good poem on a difficult subject, especially when you take into account differing cultures, and cultural values. Thanks for sharing this. Good to see someone speaking their mind about inequality.

[Harsh]

thanks douglas..............

[AmandaN]

Emotive subject and nice imagery here. Your English is a little bit out sometimes in my most humble opinion but it still flows well and I enjoyed it.thanks.

[Harsh]

thanks amanda for reviewing it..........

[Maya Waller]

This was very inspiring for women. Most people believe women aren't as superior as men and that's truly an understatement. Your flow was perfect and the inspiration gathered to create this poem is magnificent. Wonderful poem.

~Maya

[Harsh]

thank you Maya......

[Maya Waller]

You're absolutely welcome :)

[Laminators Dubai]

i live in india too, so i can get where do you get this inspiration.

you did a splendid job...

*god bless you*


by the way happy raksha bhandhan!

[Harsh]

thanks you..................
and happy raksha bhandhan to you too...................

[Laminators Dubai]

whats your birthdate? mine is 13-11-1995
and my lucky number is 13 too ....
it comes everywhere with me...
but every thing is good...

[Harsh]

13-02-1995

[Laminators Dubai]

wow thats cool!

[Laminators Dubai]

that was cool