13 word story

I saw a contest somewhere... a life story in 13 words.

Adventuring.

F

E

L

L

.

HARD.

B r o k e n.

Climbed.[ Painfully.]

Stood.

Remembered… walking.

Stumbled.

Finally, Learned:  Flying.

 

 

Author's Note

just a little something light and fun

Reviews

[Samith Pich]

Hey! This is a small 13 worded gem of a poem/ story. I think we can all related to each and every word on this page and I really like how you've experimented with the fonts (even though I'm sure it was quite a restricted list) the visual dimension they add to the poem really helped me feel the words.

Personally I would have not included all the fullstops you've included in the poem BUT the punctuation forced me to stop and really consider each word so I can see why you've included them.

Thanks for sharing

Samith

[Sukriti Suki]

Fantastic! What a creative wonderful piece.

[Tasha]

I liked this one a lot, I also liked the different fonts you used. Excellent work!

[arbitrary jane]

two more for you... because the story's never finished.

"and then"

[bob, small b. aka invs]

i don't usually like Triumph of the Human Spirit stories. this one was just the right length for me. well done.

[Ed Hart]

nice wings