surviving her

about my GF who is planning to let go of me

Tune the beat

Watch me dance

Good or bad

Don’t be astounded

 

Reveal some secrets

That are mine

The better and the worse

As it seems

 

Make a pronouncement

Of me

To the worse status

Than a grime dungeon

 

Spree in your guts

One must be right

You and me

Or  you, me

 

Then I go

Putting off  all memories

And of indelible

Faded, cast to the  bin

 

Let the moon wash its cloth

As I sit here alone

Pensive, hoping

The night is short

 

Rub on my heart

O’ cracking dawn

Golden peace

Freedom

 

By this emerging sun

Spell to me, a new day

More  than this grain of  sand

Refill my happiness tank

 

As I stare unto the sky

Let this raging heat be quenched

Let my plight and cravings be met

Permit my survival without her

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write , sir. Thank you for penning great reads...:)

[hayzed]

Thanks sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Laminators Dubai]

One must be right
You and me
Or  you, me.....

Impressive and interesting poem.
Thanks for sharing^^

[hayzed]

Thank you for the review, glitch. I appreciate you took time to read it and all

[Laminators Dubai]

Oh
its fine....you worth it.
Keep writing^^

[hayzed]

Ok.
Thanks