ON THE SHORE

inspired by my favorite place

Come on my love, and let's play
Pretend we're running away
Chase me if you can
Let us have some fun

Don't release me when I'm caught
We long and love this both
Swing my body to the air
After all, for us this is only fair

Shout the words that mean so much
Your face and hair, I always touch
Kiss me more with those sweet lips
As you put your hands on my hips

On the shore, we always do
Things in life we won't let go
Love you now and forevermore
Love won't end on this lovely shore.

Author's Note

Since it's summer, I remember US on a beach. :)

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"Shout the words" is very thoughtful line that's easily compared with / to: "Shut the eyes / slammed the doors." I see a very vivid imagery through your words... and would like to say that you're absolutely right 'bout love-feelings and of its freedom. Shore's the best place to express the feelings through "impress" / impressive love. Nice flow of ink. Enjoyed reading it!

[W R Stowe]

Very sweet and well flowing poem Dhaye there's just something about summer and beaches that intensify romance

Bill

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you for reading.

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome

[mournful bear]

Nice ! A lot of heart! It's hard, now a days, to find evermore love.

[gabrielle]

I must say that the imagery you created are like those in the movies. "Love won't end on this lovely shore", very well put, Dhaye.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A beautifully romantic poem… gotta love those sweet memories that only love can make magical.

[Eddie Davis]

A nice poem about romance on the beach, well done.