I am the sunshine the ray of your first light that kisses your cheek and gives you warmth in these cold days
I can enter even at your sealed room can pass through your closed windows to watch you there in peace while holding the glass bird in your hand
I give you the torch, the lamp that you need when the room goes dark and the flame when something needs to be held like holding a glass of rain and a bottle of wind
You tell me that stars are not far while oceans are just few steps ahead That my warmth gives you that strength to build the ladders and bridges we need
Yes, I am your light and I will share my glow with you Until the last beam that I have Because being your light gives me life
For you are the ember that ignites my light to spark For you are who I am And together we will share this light.
gorgeous poem...i love the romantic mysticism your pen weaved
through-out this gem of a write! very pleasing rhyme that touches
the readers heart and leaves a smile upon one's face.
thank you for sharing the beauty of your words, Dhaye --
love n light -- x
Beautiful and hopeful words my friend.
"For you are the ember
that ignites my light to spark
For you are who I am
And together we will share this light."
The above are perfect. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
After reading this, i pondered what does light symbolize in this piece. Light, as a metaphor or symbol, is usually interconnected with spirituality but in this piece i see "the light" as a symbol of hope. Love may die but hope last until our lifetime... another meaningful piece.
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Indeed. Without hope, even love will fade.
Thank you, gab.
Love the metaphors, the author knows his stuff. Thanks for finding this.
"For you are who I am," - great line right there. I will find a place for that if I have to write a new poem.
So nice, so sweet your a great poem, I like it a lot. Your light words gives us the warmth in this coldness days. Thank you so much for this awesome piece.
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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