A Poem by Helena





When did the moon come out in such splendour

Shining on my path of life?

When did the dawning of a new day

Creep up on a soul that was sound asleep?

When did the puzzle of my life fit into

The jigsaw of assorted memories?

Was it the day I met you?

Was it the first words you wrote on my heart?

Or. was it the love of the divine that allowed me

To find my beloved?

Gentle poet I am a prisoner of your poems…

A captive of your endearing words and

Willingly surrender to your love

Forever yours…



(c) Helena May 2009

© 2009 Helena

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Thank you for reading my words!

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God Helena Dear ,that was so nice and lovely ,so romantic..
When the moon came out with all the splendor..Lighting my life
When the drawing of new day crept on my soul ,sound asleep
It was the day I met you..The first words you wrote onto my heart
Gentle poet ,I am prisoner to those words..Held captive
While I surrender to your love..
Oh what a lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


this is awesome as well amazing, i enjoyed this

Posted 3 Years Ago

This is wonderful. Full of love and passion for a soul mate, so obviously under a spell. Thanks for sharing. Going to my favs.
Babsie Bee xx

Posted 14 Years Ago

Very romantic heartfelt piece. You could feel the emotions come off the page. I loved this piece. Thank you for sharing it.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Ah! This was so beautifully penned!
The imagery was simply outstanding and the flow was also very appealing..
Great work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

a touching poem that was beautifully written
was it the first words you wrote on my heart?
was my favorite line! keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago

What a warm and wonderful feeling I got from reading this lovely poem of yours, Helena! Love does give us such a sense of wonderment. :-) Sharon

Posted 14 Years Ago

This is just oh so beautiful and so romantic.
So touching as well. Beautifully expressed

Posted 14 Years Ago

Oh!! this is beautiful. We sometimes question what it is that caused that spark of love in our hearts and we are in awe as to what makes it such a good feeling. It becomes our every thought and act, a divine intervention.


Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really amazing written, the words are so great and wonderful.
good job.
thanks for sharing.


Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was seemed so incredibly honest and heart felt....amazing write.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 22, 2009
Last Updated on May 27, 2009




Born at Sydney N.S.W. and lived there until moving near to the Gold Coast Qld. on Australia�s beautiful east coast. I have 3 sons, 3 grandsons and two grandaughters all who are the .. more..


A Poem by Helena