We'll be Wind

Wake up

but close your eyes

Come here 

I'll tell you the secret

 

no one knows

nothing at all

 

no one knows what's up 

no one even wonders what is down

 

They won't know

lets just go

Past is gone

along with our ghosts

 

Clouds will welcome our quest

leave no trail behind

Disappear for a while

let that while be forever

Don't go back

stay with me

Lets just run away

 

We'll be wind

flying 

 

Where is hell

I don't care

I'll be there

such a small price to pay

 

I don't understand

I want to scream

tell me we'll be fine

 

Your lips utter but I'm deaf

I weep but you're blind

 

It's a prison we are in

one of concrete and hate

 

There's a lighthouse

it'll take us home

 

I'm crawling

hiding, 

in war-field

there're bullets flying above me

 

Goddamn I don't want to be alone

 

C'mon lets go...

leave everything behind

 

I'll fight all demons for your love

My heart won't sail without you

 

C'mon lets go...

there's no time left

 

we'll go steady for a while

hold my hand and I'll hold the world

no one can stop us

no one can hold us apart

 

I won't go without you

come back to me

 

can't you understand you are my sun

lets be children

careless 

worry-free

smiling and dancing

feel the sand under your feet

 

remember how your lips felt against my own

I've memorized your hands

 

I want to sing

"sing along with me"

dance to the rhythm of your heart

laugh at the joke of life

 

here hold my hand I'll show you the way 

 

I thought I'd never feel your hand in mine

 

trust me

 

let's go

Reviews

[Michael V]

I really dont have too many words, more emotions of Lives, eras, decades, and minutes, hours, and days. I love the pace you take the reader through this journey, Like if you were running holdong hands and you thought you were going down one path and the person holding your hand yanks you the other way.....If that makes senses?!..
Fun, adrenaline filled, exciting.....I had a good time, Thank you very Much GOOD JOB!!!

[Athena Manolopoulos]

This was a little too drawn out and scattered for me. It just seems like a bunch of rambling thoughts trickling down the page but it wasn't exactly attractive or interesting to read. Kind of like a diary entry. I would suggest trying to pinpoint exactly how you feel and what you're trying to say and word it more directly or in a more organized manor so readers can understand and share the feeling too.