The Hand of God

Hmmmmmm.....

The Hand of God

Lying face up, leaking life's experiences 

Outside the house of God

Shadows like soldiers trading bets

Bets on time of death

 

Fortune never smiled on me

Lovers never died for me

 

I see Him, lighted glory

He bends, hand on knife

No pull, just a twist

Come with me child, gently

 

-          CSR(Hail!)

Author's Note

Again...hmmmmmm

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Wow the ending isn't what I expected. The flow of this poem is beautiful but the topic is a deep one that could be taken different ways. It is done with a sad beauty. Great write

[Amy Bumpas]

You did very well on this one, and quite a statement here.
This is refreshing, yet it is sad. We should all believe.

[cest la vie]

This was well worth the drive-by to my old haunt...

Quite the writer..short stories, humor, heartfelt, philosophical pieces..

Well done C-Man!!!!

[Jenny Nelson]

You tried and did really well. It's a strong and thought provoking piece.

[Ruth]

Great piece xx

[c.m.]

I really like this poem, and it's good that I can really picture it since it's for the image group. Love the two lines in the middle...beautiful love.

[Christina May Shanaberg]

Nice try; I really loved it! Let's get this suffering on earth over with, Child, and get the "h" out of here. I'd like to think that God doesn't like to see us suffering and, we all know, most of the suffering, we bring upon ourselves. Well written!!
Kudos!!!

[Ruth]

Corey, this is excellent work. A little surreal, which I love! Also, wonderfully imaginative friend. An awesome poem! xx