If You'd Kiss Me

Try this on for size......yep, it fits.

If You’d Kiss Me

 

Hooked steadfast by the glimmer in your eyes

I stroked your intentions between the legs

Of my well worn jeans, eager to please

 

Taking stock of engaging conversation

Building the pressure of long dormant volcanoes

Wanting things that are not mine to take

 

So take me in and roll me about your mouth

Tongue me into the shape that you desire

If wishing made for fervent hopes

 

You’d kiss me

 

Author's Note

A little less dark....not so angry. Be gentle my friends....I know not of what I speak.

Reviews

[FlawedByDesign]

"I know not of what I speak." - HE'S A WITCH! A witch I tell ya burn him...mwuahahaha :P

How does the old saying go, oh ya, "If you want it, go and get it" - I'm sure the ladies will agree with me that they admire confidence and initiative on the guy's part. So don't wait for her to kiss you, kiss her instead :D

I'm a big fan of short poems. Sweet, concise and to the point, so nice job there.
If I had to pick favorite lines, those would have to be,
"So take me in and roll me about your mouth
Tongue me into the shape that you desire"

Nicely done sir!

btw..."between my legs
Of my well worn jeans" - I'd replace "my legs" with "between the legs of my well worn jeans". Just a suggestion.

[c.m.]

I too sense a tender heat, and it's to die for. I like the less angry side...I'm enjoying your shorter poems as well...

So take me in and roll me about your mouth
Tongue me into the shape that you desire
If wishing made for fervent hopes

You’d kiss me

Love it...this part is the best, divine. Amazing piece of work here, love...

[Ed Hart]

burned fingers! burned fingers!!

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

*falls over* oh wow that first stanza is molten hot!!! and yet there's a tenderness within the heat. gorgeous gorgeous and delicious.