Chris.

my friend.

oh, how I long
to take your hand,
to lift you up,
to help you stand.
your pain, it kills me.
I can hardly bear
to hold my tongue,
to leave you there.
I wish I could
rewind the past,
erase it all.
I'd do it so fast.
you tap your foot,
breathe in, breathe out.
you seem so quiet,
inside you shout.
you never know, dear,
how much I love you.
you never know, dear,
I've cried so much for you.
happy day, when finally
you're free from pain.
my sould would leap,
sing, and sing again.
if only that day
could be today!
to watch your suffering
just fly away.
your eyes brighten,
your face breaks in a smile,
take a deeper breath
than you have in a long while.
my one goal
at the moment, anyway
is to give you strength
until this all passes away.

Author's Note

enough said. is it too choppy or something?

Reviews

[tarasov]

i actually like the way it flows :] it's very emotional and heart felt.made even more impacting because i know what your talking about ;]
loves!
Grace.