Blinded

Blinded

A Poem by Muse

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Just like the sun
your smile so bright
find me
illuminate my night.
 
Overwhelmed I am
just a shadow, no touch
this empty void
at times is just too much.
 
Like the sun
penetrate me with life
rescue me
from the internal hate
this strife.
 
Blinded by my darkness!
 
Blinded by my
evil deeds!
 
Blinded by my
sinful needs!
 
Like the sun
your smile so bright
cure my darkness
blind me
with your light!

© 2011 Muse




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Well I could not put it better myself ---- I mean the positive views and opinions of so many of my reviewing predecessors ... I love your "Blinded by my
evil deeds!

Blinded by my
sinful needs!

Crammed full and overflowing with subliminally erotic messages that tantalise and tease. A real treat at breakfast time. Shame that I have to set off for the gym, but I will be back. AGT's N

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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wOW ! I'm really thrilled with the way you combine image and text, this works brilliantly. . . I wonder how much better this would be for the book published , compared to this website first edition ! Bravo!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


At the very worst point.. there always will be the possibility for hope. I recall that from your poetic expression.

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 23, 2011
Last Updated on May 23, 2011
Tags: Poetry, despair, life, depression. light


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