Drink Her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fair Goddess

hands stretched out

limbs wide open

honeysuckle vines

drink her

 

Crystalline glass

she'll fill it full

the intoxication

quenching a thirst

drink her

 

Fair Woman

a tree of life

dripping with rain

mouth wide open

drink her

 

Coil with her

vessel of breath

drunkenness

aperture open

drink her

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

To drink of life is to imbibe in the good with the bad - dripping with rain, when the earth is parched and one needs to be rejuvenated. To spend enough time to soak it all in, leaves one tired, almost drunken with the experience but it is then we are able to partake of the fullness of living - we must be totally spent out to fully appreciate the value of that which is so freely given!
Full of sensuality and LIFE!!

[SpokenWord]

I feel this poem really relates to nature and for me to women or more specifically a woman more so than all women. Most people push love away, and distance them self from the person who understands them the best, loves them the most and who shares the most intimate moments with them. As a relationship matures they dont drink from each other anymore instead they drink from others outside of the relationship and trust friends more than they trust their own heart in love. My woman, is my Fair Goddess and I drink from her as if she was the tree of life. I believe I will continue to do so for a very long time or at least for as long as she allows me too. This poem is very good and it speaks to me on a level maybe not intended for it too, but it describes partly of what I found in her and thus makes this write beautiful to me.

[Pablo]

How intoxicatingly beautiful . . . "drink her" - bravo!

[Tate Morgan]

I too explored the idea of natures tree of life and find this a welcome respid from ailing pains I find in many of the young now. Beautiful

[Joe Shetina]

You've got that classical style. It reminds me of something that's existed for centuries, passed down through generations. Another great work.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Nice! Mother/goddess/tree, beautiful images.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm a great fan of myth and story. Your poetry is my favorite kind. Poetry which allow the mind to wander to a better place. I enjoyed this poem. The photo came alive with beautiful and powerful words.
"Coil with her
vessel of breath
drunkenness
aperture open
drink her"
Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Forest Green]

No better way to find the essence of the compelling one than to imbibe her completely....holding nothing back.

Nice touch of Eden in your poem....;)

Good work...

[Dexter Killian]

Interesting round about way to write this

Much love and respect

[L]

mmmm I'll drink her.. very sensual