Drink Her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fair Goddess

hands stretched out

limbs wide open

honeysuckle vines

drink her

 

Crystalline glass

she'll fill it full

the intoxication

quenching a thirst

drink her

 

Fair Woman

a tree of life

dripping with rain

mouth wide open

drink her

 

Coil with her

vessel of breath

drunkenness

aperture open

drink her

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

To drink of life is to imbibe in the good with the bad - dripping with rain, when the earth is parched and one needs to be rejuvenated. To spend enough time to soak it all in, leaves one tired, almost drunken with the experience but it is then we are able to partake of the fullness of living - we must be totally spent out to fully appreciate the value of that which is so freely given!
Full of sensuality and LIFE!!

[Sleeping Maiden]

wow! This was stunning... i notice a bit of darkness along with such passion here.
I love it! Imagery is amazing. =)
Lovely write!

[John Fitzgerald]

found this poem very sensual, like mother nature stripped herself of reason and fell into the passion of her own making!

Fair Woman
a tree of life
dripping with rain
mouth wide open
drink her - tremulous imagery!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Gulps of eager lips, thirst only quenched in your offerings. I love it!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful and metaphoric.. drink her , let her inside as she is the tree of life.. oh you can write!

Chloe

[Empirik]

Mmmmmm, tasty morsels of vocabulary and women! Thank you! :) this is a rich fantasy painting in Rococo colour.

[shultzfeather]

damn girl

[Art]

she can certainly intoxicate the very core of life...nicely written poem M...

[Michael X]

The essense of passion in a drink of life, the taste of another soul, the tree of knowledge, this writing is posssesed by it's own emotion, the style and formatting bond the experience, as with all of your writing, each poem has it's own unique form fit for its meanining.

[InkLust]

Earthy yet divine, and intoxicating mixture...this reads like an invitation. Beautiful and passionate words, I must read it again.