Black Widow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

      

  

 

 

 Masculine hands, with muscular limbs

 

                        tongue tied and beautifully hung, you  

 

                            fell victim to my selfish bliss, finally

 

                   trapped by my love that was woven and spun, I

 

         caught you within my web of silkened sheets

 

              held in bondage to be my dessert, your

 

                         martyred lips are mine alone to unravel, I'll

 

                         kiss it all better, never mind it might hurt

 

                                each gasp for breath shows your unrest

                    

                sorry my love for the tangled up mess

 

                            your chest cocooned within my embrace, its

 

                              pointless to fight the blackwidows fate, 

 

                    I'll eat you up slow.....

 

                  starting first, with your sweet decadent face.

 

Reviews

[EMF]

I have nothing against a little B&D. Even a little S&M. Willing to explore many other letters too, but this takes it to such a wonderfully new level... Oh. Yes. Sorry, I'm back and not behaving any more. You have created here a true lure, that keeps mine eye's returning again and again. Partly because of the sheer quality of it. The texture of the language has a silken sensuality and sexuality of it that holds you. And frankly, I'm turned on something rotten by it. As I said befoer..... way down to the marrow

[Stacey Watts]

This was an amazing poem. I like the way you draw the reader into your web of words. Trapping a lover into a delicious, salacious affair. Leaving him to die wanting more. This was awesome.

[ghost writer]

love this! Giving into the inner black widow..a womans web is hard to resist. especially when written like this..kudos :)

[Monica]

Breathtaking emotions...

each gasp for breath shows your unrest
sorry my love for the tangled up mess
your chest cocooned within my embrace, its
pointless to fight the blackwidows fate,

I have felt this before, but had never put such powerful words to my emotions.
Bravo!!!

[Zackery Alan Daley]

This would make for a more than half-decent song. Quite sadistic feelings and deep thinking was put into this. Perhaps it hold greater meaning to you than any of us think.

[Sam Severn]

WOW! This poem rushes furiously from first line to last, then hits like a sucker-punch in the finale......FREAKIN' FABULOUS, FANTASTIC!! ㋡

[Emerald Seas]

This is very good. You hit the message on target and the picture is fabulous to accompany this poem. Dead on!

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

So I guess I'm ready for a spider-love, love the nuance and shades, the details and colors, the intricacy of your visual presentation is always so top-notch. You really know how to tell a story in verse.

[Manda]

Ooh!!! I hope this is not weird but when i read your writing, I giggle out of delight. you have a dark, adoring style that I envy and enjoy reading immensely. Please know you are great, and your writing deserves praise.

[Chris Yip]

Another one for the library, you've done it again with your choice of words, hint of rhyming and gentle rhythmic flow. Very delicately handled poem about a woman and her lover/victim. The art of seduction in a poetic sense. Very well arranged and lots of thought and design behind this beautifully presented piece of work ! A work of ART!! Congrats!