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Dead buds on these limbs to bring forth a malice spring
bleached blossoms become a whiter shade of guilty red
                made heavy from the owl that landed in broken flight
my invisible noose to hang the sun that frames thy head.



This "nothing" is a place of placid belief with stale breath
cold bark decays and renews, like the shedding of sin
             soft cries billow forth, from a widow that mourns her lover
an amnesia fills the sky; forgetting when and how to begin.



Esoteric branches that touch the hallowed questioning
a perch for the soulless that seek asylum from the storm
            the bow breaks, another cradle will rock.....watch it fall
land softly, rain shatters like glass, my blood is lukewarm.

Reviews

[Stacey Watts]

Nature and life's renewal. So beautiful the words you created here. I read the most beautiful things in your poetry. I find myself with this one just in awe. I have to agree with the others here, your imagery is always fantastic. I love the journey. Thank you.

[olla]

I like this very much.. "my blood is lukewarm"... great lines..

[ChicagoMay]

Wow, beautifully written. I've been MIA from writer's cafe for a while because of school, and came on to post a blurb and THIS was on my front page. I am so glad I clicked. Very well written. It gave me chills. When I have time, I'm definitely going to have to see what I've missed from you over the last few months!

[Cassie Fraga]

WOW!!!! I am aaawww struck.... I think this is by far the best piece I have read from you.... I mean I'm a huge fan.... but this one is DEEEEEEP... thank you for such a BRILLIANT WRITE!!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

brilliant work Muse I really liked it love the structure and flow great word choice this really was quite amazing grand imagery got me in the zone where the world around me dissapears

100/100

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Very strong emotions and cleverly written lines. Vivid imagination for the reader to ponder. Nicely done.

~Anna Rose

[Chris Yip]

By the way where do u get such fantastic photos for your poems?

[Chris Yip]

A deep tale of an old tree that has seen and gone thru much I believe. The poem reads and flows well with depth and deep reflections that explores the life of a tree. Nice play of words that is motion in poetry. Well done again.

[Rene Velez]

don't know if your looking for a title, but I would call it guilty red, nice images and does well with the image you've chosen (picture)...I like the wordplay very much, probably my top fav. from you.

[UnderCompulsion]

This poem carries some really strong emotions.I really liked this part

"This "nothing" is a place of placid belief with stale breath
cold bark decays and renews, like the shedding of sin
soft cries billow forth, from a widow that mourns her lover
an amnesia fills the sky; forgetting when and how to begin."

[André-J-Franklin]

Once again you are consistent with your masterpieces. There is never a time where i don't have to reread one of your poems to get the meaning of it. Well done it a great read!