Lost

I am so lost and just want to be found. I feel like a lonely, scared and unloved hound.

 I know that there's someone out there for me. I'm wearing my lock, now who has my key?

I'm so sick and tired of the lonesome wait. Why cant there be a fast forward button on fate?

 I walk around and see the girls and guys. Together with The smiles on their faces and the love in their eyes.

I long for that again so very badly. But i can't seem to find the one sadly.

I will keep searching for the one who is mine. The one for me that is meant to finish my beautiful rhyme.

Reviews

[bookworm]

We all experience what it is you're describing here. I have felt it so often in my life. And I recall specifically feeling it at your age. I felt so alone and scared that no one understood what I was feeling. But take comfort in knowing that we all do, but folks don't run around screaming it from the rooftops bc we're so afraid of admitting our vulnerabilites. We're afraid that it makes us too different and that others can't relate. I find writing about it trememdously helpful and its such a good idea to surround yourself in a community of people who are willing to share their hurt, pain and loneliness with you. I hope you continue to share your thoughts with us. Thank you.

[Yellow Butterfly]

We spend our whole lives searching for 'the one' at the point of giving up.

Never give up and always keep your lock close to your heart.

A wonderfully written piece..... well done!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice rhyme scheme!

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This is so beuatiful. Wonderful feelings captured.

[Emily Weaver]

This is so sweet! Also, I feel I can relate! This is just truly beautiful! (:

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautifully bittersweet write... you so tenderly capture that sense of wandering... of waiting for the one to share your life with... Love the imagery of the lock and key... Be ever hopeful in your loving search...

[HopelessDreamer]

Beautiful! I love the last sentence although i love every single one. Its completely relate able which makes it a hundred time better

[Annie]

Wow, I love it! :) "The one for me that is meant to finish my beautiful rhyme..." Great job c:

[Thea]

Aw! "Why cant there be a fast forward button on fate?"
Yah! I quiet agree!
Great poem...
:)))