Midnight Rain

A little something i wrote in biology class.

It was the middle of the night and the sound of the rain woke me from my sleep. I got out of bed and opened the window. As i opened it, the rain started to meet my face, as the drops bounced off the window sill. I closed the window, grabbed my rain boots and hurried outside. As i opened the door, i saw what seemed like a curtain of raindrops falling off the roof top. I put on my rain boots and stopped in front of the rain curtain. 3...2...1 GO! I said to myself. I burst through the rain and ran over to the covering under the trees. I watched and listened to the music of the water drops. In the light of the moon it looked as if glitter was raining down from the heavens. I ran to the street where there were puddles all around. I hesitated for a moment, then jumped into one. I felt like a little kid again. After jumping a little while more, i walked back up to the door. I turned back to take one more glance at the sparkling rain, then walked inside.

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

seems someone is a bit distracted in class. beautiful little scene here. i still like to play in the rain, especially i like to play in the rain after youth group when there is a thunder storm, its great. me and some of my friend will run around, jumping in puddles, and shooting songs of praise toward the heavens.

and Sophie, not necessarily, i've seen it rain where the sun is shinning brite as ever, the same thing could happen with the moon, i've seen much stranger weather.

[Art]

nice work...the simplicity and yet the enormity of rain and puddles, raindrops and memories all blend together...nicely written...

[Jennifer]

Awesome!!!!!!!

[Lily Mae]

The realm of magic and little fairy beings...xo :) excellent write..xo

[kjsa]

This is great I can imagine kids laughing and playing.

[AJ Kristiansen]

Magical! Loved it! Finding beauty in simplicity.... thank you for the gift of your child-like wonder!

[13ReasonsWhy]

ABSOULUTLY BEAUTIFUL. Amazing. Exactly what I would do :)

[VelvetRosetta]

Something I have not done in along time~ and something we shouldnt take for granted, the beauty of something so simple can change a day in our life, make us smile and calm our hectic lives...I love this piece you wrote..calmed my soul..ty

[KT]

Beautiful!! Makes me think of fairies. :) I wish the rain here would be magical instead of just being annoying, lol. Excellent job!

[paradise]

I love this I really do and i have to admit I would be that person :$ I love to run and jump in puddles :)