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Change

Change

A Poem by Vertigoingnowhere
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People say change is good and is to be taken with ease

Others say they hate it and wish it would cease

Friends that you have stood by,trusted and loved slowly disappearing is something i fear

I wish it didnt happen thats what id like to hear

But we cant stop change from happening even though we wish we could

Change makes up weep sad tears of sorrow

Wish it was a dream and that we'd wake up tomarrow

Some people make it look easy dealing with change

When for others it can be one of the hardest things not wanting to bare

I know it will get bad, horrible and seem like a terrible life

I just wish it didnt hurt as bad, that i wouldnt have to go through this horrible strife

© 2012 Vertigoingnowhere


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I know a lot of peeps that hate to change. Change can be good in some ways but some of the hardest things to change are found within ourselves. Outside we can sort of control to an extent...but inside you have to notice the problem first and then figure out what you can do to fix or bend a bit to it..I think that you described this problem very well..you took outside issues and related it to your feelings inside. Very well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is a wonderful poem... We can't stop change from happening no matter how much we wish we could but its not always bad either. It is some of the hardest things to go through though. You did a great job of taking some outside issues and putting them into a poem with inside issues, I enjoyed the read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


everybody goes through this. good or bad.

nice poem! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bad or good, change is usually some kind of lesson to learned. I believe we're all on some weird path where everything is basically laid out for us. We may not like what lies ahead when pain eventually comes. But they say things always happen for a reason. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Make me think of David Bowie's ch-ch-changes. I both loathe and love change. I wish I cld change and make my mind up which it is! But that won't happen because that is how most of us are ... a bit ambivalent about many aspects of our life. If we never change we are left behind. If we change everything constantly we we leave ourselves behind. Balance must be best I suspect.

Posted 10 Years Ago


you know what change really is a good thing,
it just means we don't stick around in a comfort zone,
which is good, some people hate stepping out of a comfort zone,
they get too relaxed with what is around them.
We need to cut from the comfort zone and try new things.
We can't live our life in a box all of our life.
Awesome write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Theres a nice nugget in here...spelling and form needs work.

Change is inevitable, one must change and grow or stand pat and be left behind.

Posted 10 Years Ago



'Time' is the ultimate muse, I love poems about change. and this stood up to all the drama of teenage change as well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


again another good poem,
Wonderful
with great emotion
~Amai

Posted 10 Years Ago


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hmm
Deeply emotional write feels quite personal.
Wonderfully expressed

Posted 10 Years Ago


i can relate to not being good with change. it's a very honest poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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