Ode to the Cutter's Call

Ode to the Cutter's Call

A Poem by hope.

look in the mirror,

what do you see?

a perfect girl. a perfect me.

i look in the mirror,

only to see

a worn-down girl. a torn-up me.

so Made-up for the world around.

so fake for everyone.

not caring bout the inside girl.

or life, with which, she's done.

she cries & cuts & cries some more

when nobody's around.

And when she's done, & all but numb,

she crashes to the ground.

the blood seeps out.

she's done it now. Her life will soon be gone.

All that she thinks is how she loves

that boy who did her wrong.

© 2010 hope.


Author's Note

hope.
some call it overdramatic, but i like it. what do you think?

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When thats how your heart feels, it can't be overdramatic enough can it?

It cut right through my heart.
So yes, I liked it, alot.

Antonio


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it for the most part

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love how this is the most relatable poem ive read thus far on this site.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i really like this. It shows how people really don't look deep enough to see the real person inside. i love it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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hope.

Twin Falls, ID



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