This Is The Life

This Is The Life

A Poem by Forever Hidden
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Sitting in a rocking chair

Hearing the water drip from the water garden
Every now and then, the wind warmly welcomes me.
Surrounded by nature and wild life
Letting the sun tan me
Birds singing there lovely afternoon songs
Watching caterpillars coming out of there cocoons, revealing there beauty.

But sadly, I have to say farewell to the past.

And say hello to the present.

© 2013 Forever Hidden


Author's Note

Forever Hidden
Please click the tab down below!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtPR4iSy27k

How I wish I could do that these days. ^__^
I know it isn't my best work, but I wrote it back in fourth grade to prove to my teacher on how good my writing actually is XD. Feedback is appreciated.

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Geez! In 6th grade I was writing crappy 6 lined poems that made next to no sense..yet I still got an A? What? Anyways you've got some talent js

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Me?
Talent? XD
Compare other people's work on here and mine look like it was picked out.. read more
TroubledMindsX

8 Years Ago

don't compare it to other people's this is amazing! you should be so proud of yourself!
Very nicely written, my friend and 'sister'! :D

I love the theme here and it flows great!

P.s. In the 7th line, 'there' should be 'their'. Just a little heads-up ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

YAY! WERE SISTERS NOW! :'D
Thanks! Maybe you should be my publisher and editor O.o
XD Lo.. read more
Felicity's Eve

8 Years Ago

XD
I like a coke, a patch of sunlight, and a comic book... That's perfection there, that's what it is... :P This poem makes me feel like I'm ten again, in fifth grade without a care in the world, scampering around in the sun. Not sure why. :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Admiral Kirk

8 Years Ago

XDD What was it? xD
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I was my best at twelve, I think you should say hell to the past because time is a river with lots of circles.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.
lee von cleef

8 Years Ago

I ment hello
The wind warmly welcomes me... Very poetic... Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are quite welcome...
i love this

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thanks. I think.
First, take you for dedicating it to me. You didn't have to do that. Second, such a lovely poem. You truely are good at this sort of writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dark Rider

8 Years Ago

I'm sure that's not true, but thanks anyway!
Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

No really. All my friends are at school. Other than my family, your the only one. We shall carry thi.. read more
Dark Rider

8 Years Ago

Yes, lets. :)

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Added on September 11, 2012
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