Can You?

Can You?

A Poem by Forever Hidden
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Can you feel the pain?

Standing right next to you?

 

Can you hear the silence?

Calling your name?

 

Can you find the path?

Guiding you away?

 

Can you try and search for the past?

Trying to find someone to help you?

 

Can you try and find the doors to Paradise?

Can you tell yourself all these lies?

 

Can you?

Oh, can you?





© 2012 Forever Hidden


Author's Note

Forever Hidden
Random poem! I guess it just came to me XD

Feedback is appreciated a lot! :)

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unusual. I like the font and all the questions. Great write :) ~em

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you!!!
I shall review your work asap :)
Lina Grey

8 Years Ago

review for a review, eh? well, you're welcome, and thanks, i guess :)
Whoa, that was a crazy epic rhythm... kind of like a very short beat pop song... or rap... or anything, really. :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

I put words together and called it a poem so I really do not know what it is xD lol
Admiral Kirk

8 Years Ago

lol that's the best kind of poem... xD
Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

XDXDXD HAHAHAHAHAHAHA XDDD
It's oddity factor is what makes it so stellar. Fantastic work here!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you Georgia!! :)
Beautiful. All I have to say. That one word sums it up very nicely. Great job, Hidden!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you my unicorn!! :)
Dark Rider

8 Years Ago

You're welcome. :D

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