♥ Let Me Burn...Let Me Die....Let The Pain Take Over My Soul ♥

Read the author's note please?....

Let Me Burn.

Let Me Die.

Let the pain take over my soul.

 

Trying to stand my ground.

But everything around me is falling apart.

Trying to stand the pain.

 

The secrets are whispering all around.

The rumors are heard by every living thing.

While I stand in the corner of the room.

 

 

The tears streaming down my cheeks.

Thinking of what I would do next.

 

A knife lay close by.

 

 The carpet is soaked by blood.

The screams will never be forgotten,

 

My soul now lies where everything is perfect.

Where there is no pain.

No rumors.

No secrets.

Where everything is perfect.....

Author's Note

Feedback is much appreciated! This is my first dark poems Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Felicity's Eve]

This pretty much sums up my life. :(

Great job! ^^

[Forever Hidden]

Oh no D:

[Felicity's Eve]

Yeah...-.-"
I don't cut, btw. Cutting and suicide both horrify me and I have to be strong for Valarie. She and I promised that no matter how hard our lives get, we will always come to each other and not resort to hurting ourselves. I'd never forgive myself if I break that promise.

[Forever Hidden]

I dont cut either but I sometimes felt that my life was unfair and that i wanted to die. An in the end of this poem the girl kills herself with a knife.....

[Felicity's Eve]

Oh, yeah. I know. I was just saying that I don't cut (once I was seriously tempted to regardless of my fear. Val stopped me, though.) because some people assume that I do. I think that's cuz I'm always rubbing my wrists but that's cuz the veins there have been throbing lately and idk why. :/

[Felicity's Eve]

Yeah but they don't seem to care. :/
Val is her nickname and her full name is Valarie. :)

[Felicity's Eve]

Lol I don't think that some of them even give a taco that I'm sick! :/

(Lol my sis and I made that taco thing up a few years ago XD)

[Felicity's Eve]

I'd LOVE that!!! :D