Waves

How I see, hear, and feel the waves.

When waves crash against the rocks they welcome you,

Waves make the sandy desert a place for fun,

Each wave vibrates the ground with force,

When you leave the beach always expect a wave goodbye.

Author's Note

I think its an okay poem. If you see any issues, please inform me.

Reviews

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Interesting observation of waves. Nice idea put into words. Yes We can have fun in sand . That's next good one. Yes there is always good bye . I really like it. I will be make longer and maybe observe how each wave is different if they have human feelings . When they are give birth and when they die. There is so many options what can be done. But well done.

[Ashley]

Thanks for reading and the great advice! I will definitely think about that in my next poem.

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Yes You can do that. I mean We are here to help each other. I am sure I need some advise too.

[Ashley]

True we are all here to help one another. I think your poems and stories are great just the way they are.

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Ha ha ha what you think.

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Or 50 maybe. I don't really find how old are very important. That's just age of flesh but mind can be ageless.

[Ashley]

True, gotta go bye!

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Yeah me to bye.

[kitty]

Takes me right there, this does. The rough and rampant waters - the calm, serene, glistening 'plains' like a hundred diamonds scattered here and there. Most beautiful sight!

[kitty]

Like you I am a 'lover' of the sea and all it entails. Could sit for hours and just watch the ebb and flow of tides.

[Ashley]

Thanks! lol :D

[Phoenix]

I love this poem. Everything that has to do with the beach naturally attracts me and I think you did a good jo b

[Ashley]

Thanks Micleale for the review! Means a lot! Glad you liked it. :D