Shipwrecked

Shipwrecked

A Poem by Starscraper

Ever wondered,
What it would be like
To be shipwrecked?
I have
I've imagined it to be
On a deserted island
In the Bermuda Triangle
Being there wondering 
Will anybody ever find me?
I've imagined it to be
As scary as being in a 
Dark house alone at night
While the small island
Howls at me
Ever wondered,
what it would be like 
To be shipwrecked?

© 2012 Starscraper


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How have I not reviewed this?? My computer messed up and went to this... But it's nice, even if it is four years old. Well, if you ever have any plans of editing this, the end flows a little better than the beginning, so I would try to imitate more of the style at the end.

Posted 3 Years Ago


LunarSong

3 Years Ago

Haha. That is a good defense. Yeah, I mostly just felt like I needed to review it since I hadn't. Bu.. read more
Starscraper

3 Years Ago

Well, it doesn't matter anymore.
LunarSong

3 Years Ago

Probably not. ;)
I read this and I immediately thought to myself... "Is his name Wilson?"

I like the concept this poem provokes. Most people focus on the before and the conclusion of an event. This poem focuses us on the reality. That reality gets us to ponder what our emotion might be in such a case... what would we feel? Fear... Regret... Hope... Desperation... Hunger? Then we dive deeper into that great knowing of how being Alone might truly be like.

Great poem!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very interesting and unique poem! I especially like the bit about how it would be like "a dark house alone at night." Thanks for the cool poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


You can feel the alone-ness, the wondering.

Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Different but makes you wonder. What if?

Posted 6 Years Ago


good question

Posted 6 Years Ago


I liked it a lot! My favorite part is where you said,
"While the small island
Howls at me."
I think it's awesome that you said the island howls. Great job!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that felt kinda.... off. It felt like you were starting and stopping a lot, but it was o.k. you could elaborate, and really get a good beat going!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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