i thought our freindship was going to last forever

i thought our freindship was going to last forever

A Poem by child of God
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This poam is for Ellie

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I thought our friendship was going to last forever
But then you told me we could not be freinds
At first I thought it was all for the best
But then I started to miss you

I don't understand you told me we were best friends
But then you said differently a week later
Whatever I done I'm sorry if I pushed you away

You said " if you need to vent I will always here for you "
We had good memories together
Remember that day when we got
Lost in that corn maze and
We dared each other to
Scream pasta and
We got told to shut
Up by little kids


I thought our friendship was going to last forever
But I guess not

© 2022 child of God


Author's Note

child of God
Sorry if there is improper gramer

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This poem made me cry i am serious i just went through the same things with my two best friends and i could just see everything in the poem happening to me because it did happen to me dont worry about the grammar i cant spell for my life this poem was so moving and so true to life bravo on this excellent true to life piece of work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Always hard to lose a good friend. People do change. I learn always to be kind. The roads of life do cross again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Again, I can relate, your wording is actually so amzing! I'm going through this at the moment so it does get better, but always try remember this broken girl; When a person enters into your life, their there either to last until the end, or for you to learn from them.
Hope your ok though,
Lostinthewoods x

Posted 10 Years Ago


child of God

10 Years Ago

Thank you I'm glad you like it
Sometimes friends grow apart they begin having different things that interest them.It is'nt your fault time changes and so do people .A sad poem but written really well beside as you said the grammar dont worry you will get better:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem made me cry i am serious i just went through the same things with my two best friends and i could just see everything in the poem happening to me because it did happen to me dont worry about the grammar i cant spell for my life this poem was so moving and so true to life bravo on this excellent true to life piece of work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Stephanie Phillips I am 25 years old I have been writing for nearly seven years I'm a mother of two kids daughter's autistic with apraxia of speech son adhd and I am an autistic woman who .. more..

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