Dear cuting

A letter to my worsted enemy

Dear cutting,
I don't need you anymore,
all you did was get me in
trouble, you are
not cool, you didn't
help, all you did was cover
up the pain. Yes, in the
past I thought
you were my only
friend but I
was wrong,
you are nothing
now, just
a part of my
past. Bye.

Sincerely,
Broken girl

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Good to defeat the desire of cutting. I like the flow of thoughts and the reason for the poem. Some goodbyes are needed in our life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daniel Sala]

Marvellous. A very positive poem, so clear and honest. An inspiring work for others, actually, and a monument to personal achievement for the better. The conviction of the words is strong, happy and hopeful, the poem expresses and shines real light at the end of personal tunnels. Great poem indeed.

[child of God]

Thank you I plan to ask my teacher if she can help me send it to the chicken noodle for the teenage people to see if they can put it in there next book

[Daniel Sala]

Oh, great idea, you should do that, well done, it's a really good poem. Nice to hear, your poetry is great.

[child of God]

Thank u very much

[Daniel Sala]

My pleasure, thank you.

[R. L. Hill]

It is difficult often to admit a time of struggling. The fact that you moved past a time in your life where cutting was the answer is strength. You are no longer there. Your structure may not be the smoothest or easiest to read at first, but your message is one to listen to. Well done

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

What a touching poem. Can sense your sad tone. Nice work.