look behind the scenes

look behind the scenes

A Poem by child of God

You think I am stupid?
You think I am ugly?
You think I am fat?
Really …
Look behind the scenes.
I am not. I know that.
Not that Manny people know
what I have been through.
So before you judge
before you say that one word
before you roll your eyes, stop
and think okay? I know nobody
is going to do this but it really
Impacts people's lives just
saying one good thing
about them
look past
the flaws
please?

© 2014 child of God


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Emotions coming out in this piece! Just remember when someone is putting
you done, it's because of there insecurities! I know your a wonderful God fearing
lady and only God can judge you! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

child of God

9 Years Ago

Thank you James my friend was doing a anti bully awarnes committee and she asked me if I can write.. read more
Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Great job, your welcome:)
The expressiveness in this poem is surreal. From the earliest time of life we are confronted by the judgment of others who fail to look in the mirror at themselves. An excellent read. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


No one, and I mean no one is perfect. We all have flaws. It's better to have flaws because then you're more interesting. :-)) Imagine being perfect... how boring!?

Posted 10 Years Ago


child of God

10 Years Ago

Ya that's true it would be boring :)
It would be amazing if people actually found the decency within them to adhere to this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Well all you did here was point out the obvious and it surprises me that you even wrote this down. I enjoyed reading this and the message here is clear. although i must say two years ago this would have hit my heart and touched me but now it dosent because it seems like no one is listening anymore so you learn to stop caring so much

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the message portrayed by your poem. If only people could focus on positive traits of others, world would be a peaceful place.

Posted 10 Years Ago


No one is really stupid.....looking behind the scenes!!!!
But the something we have to pity is that some look at their flaws more than others....
good work dear.....

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 26, 2013
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