always make time

always make time

A Poem by child of God

Always make time
Minutes of time
Minutes of love
Keep showing me
That you love me
For not many people
Have loved me as
Much you are loving me
If I learn to love
It will be a priceless gift
Whatever I can
Or can not do
If I love
I'll receive so much
So express it
Hugging takes only a minute
But the the the print of the hug
On my heart
Lasts forever
Your hugs
They make me feel warm
They are like no other
They make me
Feel loved
Special
Express your love
I am learning again
I use to hate love
For they took Love from me
I loved my uncle
I thought he loved me
I guess he loved to much
I loved charity
I thought she loved me
But she made me
question love
But you came
And showed me
What love is
You loved me
A broken weirdo
That has been
Through alot
You accepted me
You gave me your time
You stayed to get to know me
The real me
So please continue
Express it
Hugging takes only a minute
But the print of the hug
On my heart
Lasts forever
So let me
Borrow a hug
I promise you
I will return It

© 2015 child of God


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Stephanie, this is a heart-wrenching write. I can feel your pain from being deceived by those who were supposed to show you love. When a writer is able to bring deep emotions to the surface and share them with the reader, it is a sign of a promising writer. Keep writing...it is good therapy! ~Sharon

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

child of God

9 Years Ago

Thank you your so kind
Miss Sharon

9 Years Ago

You are quite welcome Stephanie! ~Sharon



Reviews

Here (HUG) - have that one on me

This verse -
"Hugging takes only a minute
But the print of the hug
On my heart
Lasts forever" - is a true moment of inspired writing - so memorable - it should be a Tumblr trend !!

Very well composed and executed BG. Really well written.
Okay
I'll have that hug back please ... xD

Posted 9 Years Ago


child of God

9 Years Ago

*Hug* Lol thank you for reading
good concept and well expressed...nice work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Stephanie, this is a heart-wrenching write. I can feel your pain from being deceived by those who were supposed to show you love. When a writer is able to bring deep emotions to the surface and share them with the reader, it is a sign of a promising writer. Keep writing...it is good therapy! ~Sharon

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

child of God

9 Years Ago

Thank you your so kind
Miss Sharon

9 Years Ago

You are quite welcome Stephanie! ~Sharon
So Lovely what tiny hugs can do for the heart mind and soul. Good impressions everywhere.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You are so talented my friend, another wonderful piece of work. Great message,
the title fits perfectly, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This made me love hugs even more than I already did. They really are so powerful, and you captured it beautifully in this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


child of God

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for checking it out

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Added on February 24, 2015
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My name is Stephanie Phillips I am 25 years old I have been writing for nearly seven years I'm a mother of two kids daughter's autistic with apraxia of speech son adhd and I am an autistic woman who .. more..

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