A precious component

Life is precious don't take it for grant

What Is this life
That we take for grant
We complain about everything
We blame others for our own doing
We smoke
We drink
We do the stupidest things
Life is precious
We need to think about
the things we do
Maybe instead of going out
And drinking stay in watch a movie
That one choice May safe your life
We never know when life will comes to an end
We take it for grant
maybe we should start thinking
That may save your life ...
Life is short
Live every day like it's your last
And dream like it's first

Reviews

[Saddam]

Life is short
Live every day like it's your last
And dream like it's first

Its wonderful and we all know the fact but never believe. Life is short enjoy the moment like last. Great massage in it.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Very true and beautiful! Just a few thing "We drank" should be "We drink" and "Dranking" should be "Drinking". But I beautiful poem all the same!!

[child of God]

O wow I did not notice that my phone must of changed the word thank you for pointing that out

[Valkyrie Warrior]

It's ok, my phone does that all the time and then I look at what I have written and I am like "Wha????"

[child of God]

Yea it's kinda hard with out a computer

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I can imagine! Hey check out the story chain in the comment section of my page, I would love it if you would add the next piece!

[child of God]

Ok I can try and see if I can

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Cool thank you!

[child of God]

Sorry not going to lie I don't understand where I continue the chain lol

[Valkyrie Warrior]

In the "post a comment" box

[child of God]

Ok there a go :-)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, great message!
Thank you for sharing.

[Jamestown]

Very well written my friend, I really like the positive message!
The last 2lines are fantastic, love it!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!