what is love

what is love

A Poem by child of God

What is love ?
My heart feels
Like it is on fire
After the one
person That I love
called me A monster
My lungs burn after
He told me that we
Are through after he
Told me I'll never
forget the impact
you had on my life,
I will always love you
I still love him
I still take him back
When he says
Im sory I dumped
you I was just
tired and you
wouldn't let me sleep
I was scared I love
I take him back
I don't know
If something
Is wrong with
Me I love him
He hates him self
Because of it
I should of let
Him sleep
Now even after
Knowing that he didn't
Leave me here I am at
4:09 in the morning
On a school night
With my heart feeling
Like it is on fire
With My lungs burning
Because I thought I
Lost the person that
I can't live with out
What is love ?
Am I stupid?
I will never leave
Because I can't leave
Him he is my drug

© 2015 child of God


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Very emotional writing.....but if I may comment on your reference to "him" being your drug......I know exactly how you feel, but usually when I felt addicted to someone, it was not really the right kind of love......when I met my future wife, I fell in love, and when I was not with her, it hurt, but even that hurt I could manage, because I just knew that we were going to be together......

Love, in life, does not always work out, but when we are in love, it should be an uplifting experience, not one that nibbles away at our hearts......is what I am saying making sense at all? :)

Great writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

child of God

8 Years Ago

Yes it very much does



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Very emotional writing.....but if I may comment on your reference to "him" being your drug......I know exactly how you feel, but usually when I felt addicted to someone, it was not really the right kind of love......when I met my future wife, I fell in love, and when I was not with her, it hurt, but even that hurt I could manage, because I just knew that we were going to be together......

Love, in life, does not always work out, but when we are in love, it should be an uplifting experience, not one that nibbles away at our hearts......is what I am saying making sense at all? :)

Great writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

child of God

8 Years Ago

Yes it very much does

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