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Love Me Not
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Who's Fools

Who's Fools

A Poem by kollaboratyve

I don't wanna be a bore

do not keep me crying for more

I don't wanna get too close

predicting an overdose

body screaming for lust please spare me the fuss

I don't wanna live to die and find no answer to the tears of my eye

I don't wanna be emancipated with joy and incapacitated with sorrow

I don't wanna do infatuation just to live under demarcation

I don't wanna be your fool

you have a choice you can choose

Help me too escape myself that I may be triumphant in my death

 

© 2008 kollaboratyve


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Loved this nice rhythm, (and soul)...
powerful punches in words, and wishes there my friend.
I would only change one thing
Help me too escape myself that I may(be) triumphant in my death...I would add be there!
Great work.
~Lyrical

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 19, 2008
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