Now Before Yesterday

Now Before Yesterday

A Poem by kollaboratyve
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These words came to me out of the blue and some of the concepts are abstract

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Help me find yesterday

before today begins

memories frozen solid unthaws my soul within

conscious before my mother's womb

birth by chaotic doom

mixed with bitter herbs in blood shed

of rest beyond the tomb

joyful sounds can now be said

and unspoken thoughts from the dead

upon numbered thoughts and wills undone

inhaled spirits transform my soul

weightless burdens ensnares my soul

waiting for yesterday to unfold

at sandy shores I will become and yesterday will be done

© 2008 kollaboratyve


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nice imagery. I liked the flow.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the dark feel it has and the imagery is nice!
I enjoyed reading!



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a very good choice for words, nice sound, and overall i really liked it :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thought provoking...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 22, 2008
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