My Love

A poem to that special someone

You are my rock
The one that keeps me here in this life

You are my shield
The one who protects me against my blade

You are my sun
For when my thoughts get dark

You are my heart
That keeps beating even when I don't want it to

You are my eyes
That see me as perfect even though I don't

You are my mouth
Who makes me keep the food down

You are my life
The only reason I am living

You are my love
My greatest joy in life

Reviews

[Basu Gupta]

simple yet conveying a lot....loved the theme..thanq 4 sharin

[Acer]

Beautiful, nothing much to say more...more & more, just beautiful.

[Patrick Henry]

Beautiful as you are in poem, you are in the very design of HOW you constructed this poem, and especially the words used. A wonderful tribute and a real joy to bring anyone into reality who must see their own relationship as you have given a great example for!! Beautiful Bella. Hmmmm? lol They mean the same. xoxo -Mark

[Jeremia]

I really like this. Everyone needs a firm foundation.

[Bella]

thank you! Im glad u liked it :)

[Joan*Eckhart]

"You are my shield
The one who protects me against my blade "

Such an inspirational choice of words. I loved this. It's the kind of poem I enjoy.

[Bella]

Thank you very very much :)

[Annabelle Lee]

sweet.

[Ashly Christen]

I like this :)

[The Nude Writer]

Very special poem with wonderful word choice.

[Bella]

Thank you so much :) I very much enjoy reading your writing too

[The Nude Writer]

Wow, thank you :)

[Bella]

Any time :)

[Bella]

I just realized that the stanza "You are my mouth, who makes the food stay down" might sound a little weird to people who don't know, but I'm talking about being bulimic. Just to clarify in case anybody was confused

[.Lost Soul.]

Awww