In the darkness of night

This is the first time that I am writing my poetry about something other than my feelings and reality. This is completely new to me, yet its here coz it just flowed onto paper.

 

In the Darkness of night

 

 

In the darkness of night,

the moon does arise,

with thousands of secrets untold.

Silent whispers and warm breaths,

they sigh against each other.

She doesn’t want the night to end,

‘coz the morning would bring a different bend.

Tired and sated they rest,

against each other they fall asleep.

When the morning sun shone upon her,

she knew that it was all over.

He’s gone and she is alone…

But she smiles for she knew his secret.

She knew she’d meet him again,

and again…

in her deepest dreams,

every night.

Author's Note

Let me knw how it is.:)

Reviews

[Michael X]

This is awsome, I particularly liked how the vision funnels to the ending as in the last line punctuating the meaning and imagery in essence, the flow come to life in the readers heart, to ponder the magic
that keeps a soul dreaming, the imagery stirs emotion, beautifully done, thanks for sharing your talent

[Sean Allen]

Hard to tell the difference between reality and dreams.
This has the feel of mystery about it.

[just is]

I agree with Michael, This is awesome, I like how this is presented, wonderful imagery, You do have an
amazing talent. Hope you keep writing forever.

[Ellen Hammond]

Very nice write. The imagery you use is so romantic, drawing the reader in to experience the emotions, to the end. I like it!

[Kelley]

first off I loved the font you used to write this....smiles.
I loved the romance you were having with the night.
Words flow from your mind I can tell.
This was a great write!!!

Kelley

[Vaishali..^_^]

wow..!!this is really so lovely and great..!

[Bud]

Love it! Want more!

[Eagle Cruagh]

OOOOOooooohh !

I guess you can tell, I think it is exciting,
romantic, seductive, tantalizing, mouth watering
and enravishing.

You have the gift of imagery. You are what ever
you want to be and that is shown in this wonderful
poem.

More please.

------Eagle Cruagh

[Child]

nice

[wolfsshadow25]

wow this is amazing.... i really liked it