Another Nightmare

Another Nightmare

A Poem by Liz Alexander

You say my relationships

Are compilicated

You dont know

The half of it

Believe me

At night

I dream about a guy

That I know

I can't have

I finally got him
Off my mind

In my mind

The guy is kind to wrap

His arms around me

But I cant

Make him

So in my dreams

I am plagued by the crush

I wish life could be eaiser

My relationship not complicated

But with my luck

All my dreams will turn into

Another nightmare

© 2010 Liz Alexander


Author's Note

Liz Alexander
Inspired by: lost
Finished: 1-19-10

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A very interesting piece. It is something when the good dreams turn against us. Especially the ones that transition between sweet dreams and nightmare simply upon waking.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We need hope and dreams. Sometime we are lucky and things can fall properly. I like your story and the ending. Hard to lose sweet dreams in this wild and crazy life. A very good poem.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


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So sad. I thought it would have a happy ending but it didn't. But I'm looking on the brighter side and saying that with every nightmare you become more stronger and a lot more wise. I really liked this poem...very well written. Great piece! :)

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In College. My major is Missions. Trying to pave my own way I love writing about wonders, romance, and God. more..

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