Cyanide Dreams

ich gezählt mein Geld
und gingst du
in der schwarzen Lärm verloren;
allein bin ich arm
und dein Zyanid bitteren ist

I counted my money
and you were gone,
lost in the black noise.
Alone I am poor
and your cyanide is bitter.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

clever..Whoops..25 characters needed...I'll just keep writing...how many is that?

[icelandicblue]

Isn't that just ridiculous......

[Dr. Wood ?]

it is.................................................Dots do it though

[icelandicblue]

Did you count them all or did you group them in fives?

[Dr. Wood ?]

ha ha....and another HA

[s y e]

I loved this, I am learning german in school so for me, this was amazing. I covered the English and tried to read it.... I did, until the last line, LOL!

Amazing!

[icelandicblue]

Good, if you find any mistakes let me know!!

[s y e]

Looks perfect to me!

[Traci]

Short but very powerful words, enjoyed it very much!

[icelandicblue]

Thanks for dropping in. : )

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Take care not to bite or swallow apple seeds....the pips....they contain cyanide!
Apple a day keeps the doctor away..?!

yeh ...who needs a doctor when minutes doses..of cynide have killed the patient..in installments/.

[icelandicblue]

So true, I have seen your radioactive avatar around. Thanks for visiting.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Your light attracted me to you. Now i depart happily having had a precious glimpse of your being.

[icelandicblue]

What a nice thing to say. Thank you.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

In all sincerity.

[quinfinn]

haven't seen this since my years in Kaiserslaughtern...lovely! ich sprechen ein kleiner Deutche (i think) that is probably awful spelling....love this write!

[icelandicblue]

Thanks quinfinn- I am not very fluent- it's why the poem is so short!

[quinfinn]

ah, gotcha

[icelandicblue]

Ah ja, Allein bin ich arm... But oh so rich in mind ;)
This was lovely German dear.... enjoyed this little bite of yours... :D

Excellent one!
Love to read a bit of German tonight!

- Elisa

[icelandicblue]

Danke sehr, I am happy that you enjoyed this.

[stephen dillon]

so is the english part a translation?

[stephen dillon]

because that part is most powerful