Higher!

Higher!

A Poem by Igor G. Balatsky
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from ‘The Way of Grass’

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When I was a boy of seven,

I used to climb apple-trees.

 

When I was a lad of fifteen,

I used to walk on the roofs.

 

When I was a young man,

I used to conquer the peaks.

 

And now I'm a grey-haired cloud,

I'm going wherever I want.

 

© 2012 Igor G. Balatsky


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his whole life since childhood he had a say of where he wanted to go and what he wanted t do. now, as an old man in dotage he still carries that attitude that he will go wherever he wants to go. you see the progression of a young child to the man who will make his final decision of where he would like to go. it's like a parable. an enjoyable read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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ha-ha-ha! grey-haired clouds usually do not go anywhere because they already understand that you do not need to go far to enjoy the happiness and joy of this world!!! :))))) loved loved loved this poem!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I wish I had been braver when I was young, but I'm ready to take on the world now.


Posted 12 Years Ago


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. beautiful ...
. i think i might have turned into a cloud when i turned 9 ...
. maybe we shouldn't have to wait to go wherever we want ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


his whole life since childhood he had a say of where he wanted to go and what he wanted t do. now, as an old man in dotage he still carries that attitude that he will go wherever he wants to go. you see the progression of a young child to the man who will make his final decision of where he would like to go. it's like a parable. an enjoyable read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We are locked into rut of comprehension and perception. :) You dare step outside approval.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Perhaps the sky is the limit! Wonderful contrast of age, Igor!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cool! Of course, if it's speed you're interested in, you can get a small plane and then run circles around the clouds :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



I'm glad you are writing a lot. Where do you want to go?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great...shows ever-widening cycles.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahhhhh .. And that is .. as it should be .. until the next life .. ..

I like .. Jasmine

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Igor G. Balatsky

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